Time Traveling Hero

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So, as the author my opinion is completely valid and obviously unbiased. With that, let's start the review!

So, what I can offer, from the beginning at least, is that the main character, Unnamed Boy, is different from most MC's I've read/watched. He's very layered, and his actions at times may not make sense, but most of his actions get explained at the end of the first arc/beginning of second.

The cast of characters is also very colorful, from the emotionless Silver-Haired Girl, the quirky Prez, and to his doting big sister Eris, they all make the story humorous and interesting.

Now, the premise of the story, as you've probably read from the description, is the Unnamed Boy's eventual adventure through time. There'll be badass fights, crushing scenes, typical stuff like that. The world itself is unique in it's own way, since the city they live in has many unusual incidents...

Overall, you should read up past the first arc to really get a feel (The first arc is 15 chapters) of the story and see if you're interested.

The last thing to note is this part of the Hidden Powers Saga, meaning the main characters abilities won't be revealed until the end of the story, so have fun theorizing!

Hmm sci-fic novel. Already got a twist of an adventure.... Wanting a peaceful life but everything goes AWOL or changes wen MC meets the silver haired girl. Not really a sci-fic person, not that I have anything against it, but this particular story got me hooked up. Nice storyline. Good work author.

Seems to have some influence from Japanese light novels. Good characters and an interesting plot so far, will be interesting to see what happens.

Wow! Just so you know, I am not a very sci-fi person but this does make me want to keep reading and know what happened in the past for our male lead to become like that. I also see that you're heavily influenced by Japanese media.

I did find it difficult to keep up sometimes when there was a sudden change in tenses or the genders while describing the events. Otherwise, it is really a great read, and I, most probably, will continue reading it. I personally really like characters like the raven head maiden. They are the best but my favorite part is male lead's interaction with his li'l sister XD
And also, there is some element of comedy in-between and I really like it.

The narrator intrigues me, but from a personal point of view I like to know the name of the person talking. However, I entirely enjoy the style of writing and, even tho sci fi isn't usually my cup of tea, I will definitely be continuing to read and follow the development of the story. Overall, would recommend.

I am greatly enjoying the writing style of this story so far! The protagonist/narrator is funny and definitely feels like the age he's described as. The silver haired girl is strange but intriguing. I look forward to continuing to read through this story!