MARTIAL RESEARCH MASTER

I read this about 1 year ago and I must day Im disappointed. Not because the novel is bad, no. In fact I would say its amazing for the novels on webnovel. What Im disappointed in are the insane grammar and spelling errors in the novel. If they were to be fixed, I would read this regularly. The novel also has some odd things with techniques. I still dont fully understand the cloning technique, even after reading 150ish chapters. Having an auxilary chapter to explain techniques like this would be useful, because I had to wonder what he could do and couldnt without any answers. Finally, cliches. The novel has MANY. But, they arent in your face telling you how cool it is to be supreme etc. Its mainly for plot and story, so the MC, the main focus of the story, doesnt suffer from the usual bs that comes with all the cliches.

It has potential to be amazing, but holds itself back due to its details.

I just want to tell the author that PLEASE SPACE THE BIG PARAGRAPHS THEY ARE HEADACHE INDUCING AND ARE HARD TO READ.
Also, I just saw the first couple of chapters

I am student, don’t have that much money to spend on novel but i really like to read novel but this novel is not posted on any other website as wux or qny other

The story is still not failing to amaze me.....the progress of the plot can only be described using one word: perfect. Long TAO is rather calculative and plan well. Let's see what happens next.
Awaiting the next chapter.

First let me say I love the story, if i only liked it id have dropped it. seriously needs an editor. lots of spacing errors that have the correct words but two words end up wrong as a result. Some incorrect words and some words that only make sense if using a thesaurus(those i actually dont mind bc it expands my vocabulary even if i have to look them up). I really like the mc and his OP “I cultivate everything” setup. Im interested to see where things go from here (im in the 60s chapter wise currently)
To the author let me say good story, keep writing and I’ll keep reading.

good novel
worth reading
has potential
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As someone who caught up to the most recent chapter , this novel is decent . it has a great concept but its poorly executed. This is the type of novel you read when you are bored and dont think too much into what you read. Also the fight scene are below average at best.

The concept of laws were annoying. The author keeps mentioning laws but never explains what they are or how they help in battles. There are different levels of laws but its never explained why a heavenly law is better than an earthly laws. All we know is the heavenly laws are better and that’s it.

The avatar art is never truly explained . All i know is that he makes avatars and the benefits are increased qi reserves, improved comprehension speed and the all share the same mind, so they are share the same techniques. But whats confusing is how they are made and why can’t high level Martial artist tell that the person they are talking to is an avatar. Also when the avatars cultivates their bodies, is the same benefits shared with the rest of the avatars or with just the main body.

Like i said great concept , terrible execution . READ ONLY IF YOU ARE BORED.

Thanks for the novel