Known Stranger

Wait wait? this is my second review of this novel, i'm doing another one because i felt the first was unfair lol. honestly this is peak, not because i'm trolling coz the author is an IRL friend. (_( XD

I'm so glad you wrote another book hopefully we have a strong female lead just like our dear rose and happy ending as well and with the people that cross gets their payback as little

1: Agreeing and ExpandingMy perspective! Javier's father is the main character. He does seem to drive a lot of the plot with his predictions and his vast network of connections. Plus, his harem situation is certainly a significant aspect of the story. It makes you wonder if Javier's journey is more about reacting to his father's influence than forging his own path.2: Acknowledging but Offering a Counterpoint:That's a unique take! While Javier's father certainly has a strong presence and seems to be a major player with his predictions and diverse harem, I still see Javier as the central figure. His journey, growth, and the challenges he faces seem to be the primary focus, even if his father's actions heavily influence those challenges. The father might be a powerful force, but the story seems to revolve around Javier's reactions and choices.3: Focusing on the "Harem" Aspect:You've got a point about Javier's father being quite the central figure, especially with his impressive harem! It definitely feels like a significant part of the narrative and impacts many of the events. It makes you wonder how Javier will navigate his own relationships in comparison.4: More Questioning and Open-Ended: That's a thought-provoking idea! The father's predictions and his extensive harem definitely make him a powerful and influential character. Do you think the story would be as compelling if it focused solely on Javier's father? What aspects of Javier's story make you see him as more of a side character in comparison?5: Short and Punchy: Javier's dad definitely steals the spotlight with his foresight and that wild harem. Maybe Javier is just living in his father's world!My Perspective have some mistakes 😕

So, as a novel, is not worthy, tons of grammar errors (nothing like MTL, you can actually read it and understand it), quite unidimensional character, and personally i find the plot kinda boring (I have read just 11 chapters, but it hasn't engaged me), despite that there are some hints that there's maybe an interesting plot further down the line under all the lemons and slice of life.Now, if you are here for the "plot" and lemons, you gonna find as much as you want, not specially well described, but let's say you will have all the fast food you way want (and I've only read 11 chapters!!)All in all, not for me.

This is an amazing story so far. Waiting to see more of the harem development and how they will help the MC. I really recommend it. Keep up the amazing work, Author.

"Here, drink this" Ben took out a bottle with a pacifier, which has milk from Miltank.

"I love you so much Ayato..." Miyano said and she is likely to cry any moment.

[Lily: Ah, nice observation little Jun and the answer is, it is drawn from the surrounding.]