Jormungandr's calamity

Bad grammar, I know author isn't a native english speaker but that doesn't change the fact that it's bad grammar, the dialogue is artificial and robotic with no "" to tell when a character is talking. I'd put stability of updates at 4/5 stars but if I did then my total score wouldn't represent what I think of the story. I can't comment on the story a lot since I've only read 3 chapters (that was enough for me to stop) but there's something off about it. Characters so far are quite flat. World background is, I'm guessing, mostly from north mythology with maybe some things the author adds in himself. He also abruptly gets a system.
Overall, it's pretty bad but if the author polishes his english, and stops writing character interactions and dialogues like he is right now then I see potential.

Good story you have there... Although beast type Mc limit the plot building abit and less character due to "Eat of be eaten" principle, but I have hope in this... Still awaiting until he truly unlock the bloodline potential.. Hope author could throw in some of his creative brain juice to his original ability..

The story is original, and I love the way the author portrays the thoughts. The way the plot unfolds, is very exhilarating and full of suspense. This is a must read book, it's already one of my favorites. Good story, good plot good stuff.

This is the script of a tiny snakes journey to change the world. If you like a great take on the evolution and cultivation genre with a strong eastern fantasy vibe and a regular 5 day update schedule you absolutely should have this in your library.

Imma read your novel later but I have to let you know that in the synopsis you put hunt instead of hunted...

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