When the Heaven Spirits descended, all that bore witness thought of it as a blessing. Only those that survived knew that it was a curse, shackles in place to monitor all beings within Heaven\'s Code, limits imposed to suppress all beings.
Sheng Tian, who\'s talent transcends even that of the Absolute One, desires to break out of the confines of the Heavenly World and establish his own sanctuary. Will he fall facing the Guardians of the world? Will he stay true to his original intentions? Only time will tell.
Operation Revision is underway! I will slowly but surely go back to my earlier chapters and revise them, using the experience I gained to patch up the holes.
Any chapter that I have revised will be stated at the bottom in author\'s thoughts.
Current progress: Chapters 1-10

Heaven's Tribulation
- Genre: Eastern
- Author: DaoistWenMing
- Translator:
- Status: Ongoing
- Rating(4.3 / 5.0) ★
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Popular Reviews
Anyways, here's my analysis of my very first novel;
Grammar, punctuation, and use of clever language I would say is my forte. (Please do point out any mistakes if you see then though)
I would say the first 60 chapters or so could have been better and used a bit more polishing. However this is my first novel (Please don't kill me)
Also, I'm dumb, so leave more reviews cuz I read all of them. (I do wish to improve my writing skills)
would like the author to
1. make the chapter titles more expressive
2. put on a good book cover
3. make his writing style more dramatic
4. put on a good and interesting summary
all to attract more readers...
best wishes for future
As a reader, I found the premise of your story to be very intriguing, especially with the heavenly tribulation origins. The world has potential for intrigue and grabbing someone's attention. I appreciate the creativity.
As for the con, the conversations between the characters are not organic, making it feel unreal and stiff. Also, the transition between the different scenes seemed a little rushed.
In my eyes, your novel has potential as long as you work on the interactions and the pacing. Those are my humble two cents as a reader. All the best!!!
Good English grammars, didn't waste my time reading all chaps, waiting for more chapters.
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