Fox in an inverted world

Arthur's original father was not reincarnated in the inverted world but another man from his previous world who was carried away by his anxious desires and died in the end by a succubus.

Very original and picturesque story, I love it.

I would say that the main thing in this story will be the development of both characters and general and the originality of having two reincarnates

I like the novel feels like something new.

Pro: nice characters
        Interesting Story
        yanderes big + for me
        
Contra:Way to many he/she/we/you and others mistakes really easy to fix to improve the reading experience.
A bit slow progress/age growing for me.

Overall i keep reading the story,but author maybe led some one help you?many chapters could be easy fixed in less than 10 minits.

Definitely one of the best novels I have read in webnovel.

Although the writing and grammar are not very good, this novel is very original and I have never seen anything like it, and now that I've read to the latest chaper(Chp 9) I'm craving for more!

9/10 - Very good

F*ck it!

Since he has the same surname as me(De Leon) lets make it a 9.5/10 :)

Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.

My honest opinion and what I noticed, the story has minimal errors in terms of writing, it doesn't get in the way of reading, the release of a week can bother some, but due to the quality of the story, it's not possible to remove the merit just because of the capitols delay (I prefer quality over quantity). The narrative isn't bad, it's good. And about the story, volume 1 was pretty standard, nothing special that I remember, but volume 2, I thought it was very good, it was wonderful. But as everything that goes up will also have to come down, we arrived at volume 3 which is horrible and dark, not because of the writing but the course that the story took, and instead of the author changing the course he continued, if you don't believe me can you read the comments on the chapters of the third volume, do you want the reasons? The protagonist's behavior becomes irrational and a new character is as useful as Sakura.

People can come and say that volume 3 is to develop the character, yes, but you don't develop a character by irritating your reader, quite the opposite, you have to develop it by making your reader feel empathy for the protagonist and not anger. But it's no use saying that the protagonist had his reasons, the reasons are not clear for several capitolos making their attitudes irrational, doing things that normal people wouldn't do.

a good Novel, it has yandere and that is most important thing for a man of culture like me[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

The only thing lacking is stability of updates. Of course I understand that good stories need time yet I will give 4.8....................................