Fate's Reversal: The Divines Return

Alright, so I guess this is the obligatory norm in this situation? But this is the 10th review. So I shall, ahem...shamelessly give myself 5 stars. As well as offer my own personal critique of my novel. I will avoid spoilers and only give what I think needs to be said.

**Take this with a grain of salt as I am a completely new author striving to hone my skills.

For starters, as this is made there are slightly over 60 chapters to the serialization. Much of the world has yet to be explored on both front; however, this wasn't the purpose of Volume 1.

The background of the game world has been given but the complete state of both the real and game world hasn't. This will serve the purpose of generating flow in the next volume. I will try to intricately formulate scenarios that express the world's state without providing humongous lore dumps.

As for character molds, I tried to veer away from the scripted and make their reactions fleshly and oftentimes comical depending on the situations. Characters with backstories, however, will have more distinct personality scenes as showed a few chapters already.

Some might think the pacing for the level up and character gains are too swift, BUT, I try to this to the idea of low levels usually passing by quickly as with a real game. However, the novel will be incorporating many different paces to add diversity. So sit tight on that.

Moreover, the common tropes found in these novels—I try to develop mine further. For example, the random reincarnation is not so random and instead facilitated by a being. Secondly, the random teacher making the MC OP ties into a deeper purpose; the power creep isn't easily gained.

All in all, I've put a fair amount of effort that continuously accumulates into this novel. As a result, I hope you enjoy this novel as much as possible if you do give it a read. Thank you~

I am the exp of my sword.
webnovel is my body, and exp is my blood.
I have created over a thousand useless review.
Unknown to death, nor known to life.
Have withstood pain to create many reviews.
Yet, those hands will never hold anything.

So, as I pray...Unlimited Exp Works!.

Not gonna lie im kinda surprised about how few reviews this novel has and i think you should read it if you like game/mmo  novels HOWEVER

you should be warned, its one of those mmorpg novels where the game is something more than just a game eg something from the game can be used outside etc. most close comparisons would probably be novels like "guild wars" and "shuras wrath"

if you care about game balance you are gonna have a field day. all titles and unique things are hilariously broken. anyway

i cant complain about writing or updates, mostly typos updates are pretty consistent so +1 from here

the story, there is some things which i dont really like, however they are personal preferences so i cant really hammer the author for that (mostly cultivators and swords) the development is pretty fluid and my biggest gripe is the huge amount of time spent in the desolate world/realm? and the short time between powerups, you dont really get a feel for how strong he really is. personally i wouldnt mind a slower burn with more detailed actions and descriptions. but still good +1 here

Characters are excellent, i expected nothing and got a pretty good return. the cast we have some background on is really quite likeable, has flaws and strong points, sure it aint no shakespeare but is really quite good for a free webnovel. funnily enough i find the cast compelling enough for me to overlook my bias against swords and cultivators. the author has a good kind of eccentric way of writing, you can call it a bit edgy, but i find it quite compelling speeches specifically. combined with some pretty wholesome intimate parts. all in all i really like the characters +1

the world is probably the least developed both in and out of vr it does the job alright, but has minimal descriptions it is only 60 chapters so far, so take it with a grain of salt, packing character development and world building into 60 chapters is gonna be a challenge for even the best of writers

suggestions/preferences as stated before i wouldnt mind the novel to burn a bit slower, things happen pretty fast i enjoy the details and descriptions of the world around him alot. a bit more world building and you are golden. i would say more chapters but on this point us readers will probably never be satisfied.

best of luck with your novel
-88

great writing quality with good sense of humour
perfect start of story with great continuation
characters is interesting (a lot of changes in emotions)
stabile updating with great new content in each chapter
great world background in VRMMO game as well as real world as story is in game and real life
continue hard (hopefully pleasant) work

Best novel about VRMMO games but it's even better that novel will continue as fantasy world. I give 5stars and I'm waiting for next chapters.

This story has a great premise! This book for real broke all expectations I had for it. Keep up the good work and this story will go places. 10/10 for sure!

It gives me the vibes of "Reincarnation of the strongest sword god". Perhaps it was inspired by it, but I hope it will not turn into the loop of ever-stronger guilds to fight...

So far it gives me a lot of hope for a good long successful novel that would be one of the best of the mmorpg genre novels.

Slight critique is that the world building feels slightly rushed, but if that means the novel will not be too slow paced and kills the interest of impatient readers like myself, so be it.

**: first review ever, love the novel so far and best of luck.

Adoro a história e como ela começou, só não entendo por que adicionar cultivo e esses "VitaShakes" à uma história na qual é baseada em jogo, em vez de enfatizar a habilidade do MC. É igual outra história que li aonde o foco praticamente deixou de ser o jogo para ser quem tinha se "cultivado" ou tomado mais "VitaShakes". A história é sua e respeito, mas sinceramente perdi em 90% a vontade de continuar lendo. Estou no Cap.81 é quando aparece o chefe dos Titãs e percebi que vai ser uma merda, posso está enganado, mas desanimei.