Cosmic Dream

it's not bad.Slightly improve on your writing but other than that it has potential

I don't read a lot of books here, but this one reminds me of ones I do like. It has a darker tone to what I usually rear, but the interest it is creating in the schemes is something that I want to read more about.

" Hey Wonho hyung~ What's with the thinking at this late night hour? " I.M suddenly jumps in and asked me.

"Calma Isaac, ela é uma garota então não estrague tudo..." Pensou Isaac soando enquanto Marill pulou do seu colo e abraçou a menina.

She felt so happy in that moment that she started singing in the shower.

This story gives, I Was Caught up in a Hero Summoning, but That World Is at Peace, vibes. And by going by how enjoyable that story turned out to be and how this story is shaping up I am thoroughly exited. It's been a while since I found a genuinely enjoyable story. Keep up the good work! (ﾉ≧∀≦)ﾉ

Dunno if I want to start this since it's probably going to get dropped... I'll start if it makes it to 100 chapters.                                                                                                 .

In the initial three chapters, Jack is depicted as a grandfather who longs for family bonding, but is isolated from them through a series of unfortunate events. The unfortunate events he experienced makes it seem his attachment to his world will fade after the initial shock of being transported. In summary, Jack is a likeable character. Although, the new world background has not been fully introduced yet. However, judging by the quality of the story and the first interaction with the new character from the New World, it will not be disappointing. Something I found interesting is how the main character ends up in awkward situation as soon as he is transported.