Conquest Carnival: Two Worlds Collide

Hey, is this discontinued? I’m kinda confused, cus it looks really promising, but I don’t want to spend too much time reading something that wont even get a proper ending.

G'day friends! Here's a 5 section review for Flare's novel!
Writing quality: Great writing. The grammar is good, and there aren't any spelling errors.
Stability of updates: Batch released chapters as opposed to daily updates, which works for me!
Story development: The story is developing slowly and with a lot of slice-of-life. The attention to detail is great, but the pacing is a lot slower than in most novels. Great for a slower read, but the excitement is a bit more spread out.
Character design: The characters seem interesting, and have a lot of detail behind them. That said, a lot of characters are introduced very fast, (in the intro chapter) to the point that it is difficult to even tell which side they are fighting for. I'm sure that we will get to know the characters over time, but having so many new characters being named all at once was a bit confusing.
World background: Has a lot of detail, and based off the end of the intro, there will probably be quite a lot of interesting stuff set up in the future!

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Never had I read a novel before that kept me wanting to read more, but this one has. I love the wonderful effort you put into your work; the plot is so engaging, the characters are dynamic, and every detail is exquiste. I am very impressed!
I hope you continue your writing! Best of luck to you!


~ Mrs. Flare

Fun and exciting read with an equally fun and exciting protagonist. Zack is entertaining at times as well as being a badass. He's also different in character, and his role within the story is vastly different from what I often see in novels around Webnovel.

I appreciate the balance between the text that shows game elements and the story paragraphs. Everything is easy to read. I have yet to see more about the world, but I think there would be more to show in the future.

Looking forward to more chapters.

Honest review here! I actually enjoyed reading it ehehehhe~

Well first, the writing is amazing, it's smooth and easy to follow :3 I like to imagine the scene happening as I read hueheheh

For update stability, full stars since I know writing needs a lot of effort, and it's not that easy to always update everyday eheheh

And about story, although some might complain that the pacing is slow, but well in my opinion, the daily life adds extra layers to the character. Like we can learn how they think and act that way, which I like. And even though it's not jam-packed with actions and what-not, we can still clearly see where the plot is going, so i kinda like it still :3

For characters though, not much to say from meee, because I personally care more about the personality and how they act, compared to how they look. That being said, even though I prefer the side characters more because the MC is ahem, maybe spoiler-ish idk, pretty perverted. That's only my opinion, but in a way, that's good because it's more humane to have flaws, and flaws are characteristics, too. I look forward to seeing more flaws since right now he's being portrayed as a genius hard-worker who got the highest score and a good sum of money and a deep-thinker, while his flaw right now is just... Perversion? The thing that kinda made me wonder, though, is that sometimes the MC acts weird, but that's probably going to be explained later. Like how he was sooo desperate to chase after the thief because that game was extremely important to him, but then stopped to listen to the thief's story. I mean, sometimes people do that, but when you're at a risk of getting something extremely important to you, i think most people would just leave rather than risk getting sneak attacked or ambushed by the thief's friends, idk? Prolly I'm just being picky ahahaha--

World background is pretty okay, it's a virtual reality game and it's exciting, but I think I still need to read more to fully understand it ehehehe since I haven't read too much, and so far I think it's just like, well, a VR game :3

Great work, author~

This novel manages to blend a sophisticated narrative style with entertaining dialogue, which is quite the feat. The setting of this story is wonderfully described, and the characters are memorable. Development wise, this story seems to be taking things slowly (very slice of life like), and that's not bad at all. It allows us readers to get familiar with the characters and their world. In short, I'd def recommend this novel if you're interested in a gaming novel. Keep up the good work author :D

man when I saw that it was cancelled I was very sad, but now it's back and once again I highly recommend you give this a try, I love everything, the fights, the dialogue, the characters, and the occasional detailed parts.

in summary read it, it good, yes