Condemning the Heavens

Shameless Author here, with a shameless review.

This novel, Condemning the Heavens, is my current main novel. It is my third cultivation novel and I have been writing it for over a year.

It follows a guy who just wishes to be a hero, but reality is cruel and life goes against him time and time again. He is forced to flee for his life and he gathers friends and companions alongside his journey.

The story is about how there is no good or evil in the world, that everything depends on the view of each individual, and that you have to fight for your own happiness.

I have written quite a few novels. On this site I have Blue Phoenix and Overthrowing Fate which both are complete and cultivation novels. Apart from them, I also have a female cultivation novel called Forsaken Immortals, which happens to be a fantasy romance, and a few other modern romance novels.

If you have nothing to read, please give these novels a try, I hope you will enjoy them!

THERE ARE SOME SPOILERS.

Nothing major just about how the mc acts and some reasons explaining the points of why I am wanting to drop. (Hopefully the author can clear some of it up?)

The two major problems for me that stand out above everything else, that is making me want to drop are, When does he stop becoming a slave to his "uncle"? I just cbf to waste any more time on this if doesn't stop soon. I mean he should already have his doubts about him already.

From all his supposed intelligence the mc was shown to have during the earlier chapters, it's baffling how he doesn't have some doubts. His town was supposedly killed by beasts but he is magically the only one still alive? He doesn't remember anything but when he does or tries to it is painful?

He should have had his doubts in his "uncle" considering these facts but still believe in him considering all the time they spent together. However, it should have become frighteningly clear that something is wrong after speaking to Lan.

Let's not forget what he called the uncle and even hinted at why. But the most important thing is he learnt about the soul/mental technique. He can make someone kill themselves, take their memories etc. This should have made it glaringly obvious and confirmed his doubts about something about his uncle is wrong. He should know that if he can do it, what is stopping an even stronger person doing it to him? Or is he so fcking arrogant to ignore this?

He should have realised that his supposed memory loss is because of a soul/mental technique. Then adding on all the other clues he has been given then he should rly be starting to doubt his "uncle" and start realising some of the truth...

However, it's like let's just ignore all that and keep the mc as a dog/slave/pet of the uncle. Make the mc seeth with rage everyone says something to discredit his master and be a good little pet and make him proud...

I honestly can't stand it and rly want the author to just get on with it. The whole memory, adding on with all these clues should have acc lead to something.

Another thing is the whole rage thing... I liked his other personality better. Where he didn't care about what others thought. Ignored them and only went after people who are directly after him. Now lately it's just been the mc acting like a fcking madman for no reason.

I'm guessing it's because of the scripture or his special body that is giving him the rage. It was mentioned it was half the rage and the other half was him the calm side so maybe he has a beast side?

However, how long does this last, when or does he reach a balance? I don't want to read about a psychopath madman that just wants to kill everything... compared to his first personality its a difference between night and day.

I dunno just cbf to read about an mc losing control constantly going on a rampage every time he fights... plus it always starts or ends with the mc always smiling EVERY SINGLE TIME. Like we get it he is crazy. Do you have to mention the smile that everyone notices but him every time he fights or about to battle??

But yeah, prefer the mc having some intelligence like it was made out he had but in reality, he doesn't...

Yeah, anyway gl to Author

as im reading this book i want to just keep diving i could read it for days on end if i could and anytime i get passes to read more this is the first book i think about if you like an underdog that grows in strength but is still fair and not a snob i think you would like this book

Amo este libro, espero que el autor siga adelante. Felicidades jazz creado un mundo maravilloso. Amo a wei y a land [img=update][img=update][img=update]

Me emociona este libro, es sencillamente maravilloso. A medida que lo leo no puedo evitar preguntarme como es que yo no había escuchado de él antes. Maravilloso, sigue así

Amazing story so far, I read blue phoenix aNd loved it, this story Is turning out to be a Great read. easy to read and follow , good characters and an immersive world. Well done

I am really enjoying this reading. I like the special environment the author has created in this novel. It is really satisfing. I hope it will still entice my imagination. As for now, i really hope it gets more recognition. You earned it !

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