Arcandria Online : The Best Summoner Online (English Version)

A good story decent characters but the translation is just god awful for an example one line is "A contracted beast can only have 5 contracted beasts"

the story has potential, but the bad translation/ Grammer/sentence structure puts me off immensely.

like the story but way to hard to read it poorly translated

it's a good story but unfortunately it's way to hard to read due to the poor translation

Hello and an honest review from me. The story was good, minor grammar mistakes so that's great. The flow of the storyline in the first chapter is simple without any twist or turn. Other than that, keep up the good work author

The writing and grammar are horrible, but the novel itself is pretty good.

We're no strangers to love
You know the rules and so do I
A full commitment's what I'm thinking of
You wouldn't get this from any other guy 
I just wanna tell you how I'm feeling
Gotta make you understand
  Never gonna give you up
Never gonna let you down
Never gonna run around and desert you
Never gonna make you cry
Never gonna say goodbye
Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you 
We've known each other for so long
Your heart's been aching, but You're too shy to say it
Inside, we both know what's been going on
We know the game and we're gonna play it 
And if you ask me how I'm feeling
Don't tell me you're too blind to see  Never gonna give you up
Never gonna let you down
Never gonna run around and desert you       
Never gonna make you cry
Never gonna say goodbye
Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you          
Never gonna give you up
Never gonna let you down
Never gonna run around and desert you         Never gonna make you cry
Never gonna say goodbye
Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you 
(Ooh, give you up) (Ooh, give you up) Never gonna give, never gonna give (Give you up) Never gonna give, never gonna give (Give you up) 
We've known each other for so long
Your heart's been aching, but You're too shy to say it
Inside, we both know what's been going on
We know the game and we're gonna play it 
I just wanna tell you how I'm feeling
Gotta make you understand 
Never gonna give you up
Never gonna let you down
Never gonna run around and desert you         Never gonna make you cry
Never gonna say goodbye
Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you                   Never gonna give you up
Never gonna let you down
Never gonna run around and desert you       Never gonna make you cry
Never gonna say goodbye
Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you         
Never gonna give you up
Never gonna let you down
Never gonna run around and desert you       Never gonna make you cry
Never gonna say goodbye
Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you

Interesting Story, but the grammar and English is too broken to read. If the fixed the language and made it readable it would be a good read.

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