Torned (The Alpha's Secret Babies)

It feels very nice and I can sorta understand the main character and what the author was going for. I can't wait for the next chapter to come out!

Yaay a sequel. I really like this story I wonder what surprises will await for this one. It started with an interesting tempo. I am waiting to see what will be the mood in this part of the story.

     "Already using pills? Hmph, it seems having such a background can also be considered a talent after all." The priest said with a derisive smile.

Name: Adrione Devon

Hinata who was clearly in a very very rare rage came at koan like a red tsunami who would eat him whole without even brewing salt on him

"Wow, you look great!" Chloe tried to mask her confusion with excitement. Her aqua hair was hanging down over her shoulders, neatly combed, sitting on a warm looking sweater, and her pants were a pair of khakis, probably from school. "You look like an eagle laid eggs in your hair." Talia added. Her hair was tied in a braid, and her goggles covered her eyes. She wore an orange t-shirt and a pair of red shorts. Yeah, she's right. I guess that's what happens when you do a hack job of drying yourself off. Still, "You can't judge somebody when you're wearing shorts in 16 degree weather." I grunt proudly, folding my arms. My uncle arrives at our table, placing down two mugs in front of the girls before leaving, giving me a warning glare. I unfold my arms. "Mmm, forgot how great this tastes." Chloe fondles her cup with a strange smile on her face. "You were just here yesterday. Calm down." Yesterday? Are you kidding me?! "Yeah, she was under you this whole time. Feel bad yet?" I do, but I can't let her know that. "So, why isn't Chris talking about the mission with you guys?" Talia shrugs. "Don't know. He's been silent in general whenever we meet up. That's why I'm bothering you. So, spit it out." I suck in some air through my teeth. "What's in it for me?" Talia rolls her eyes. Help us this last time, and we never bother you again." "Deal." My response was fast enough to almost be considered disrespectful. "So, start talking." I tell them most of what happened. From first seeing the beast to feeling it's teeth sinking into my face, and everything else...I leave to the wayside. "Ah crap." Talia says after a moment of thought. "So, it sounds like you entered an 'Interpretation.' It replicates someones soul and turns it into an area that other souls can enter. Did you ever feel weird during our walk to the shed?" I nod my head. "That was your soul leaving your body." I took that info in surprisingly easily. "Yeah, okay. Makes about as much sense as every other strange thing that's happened." Chloe awkwardly chuckles, trying to disappear into her seat. "Yeah, well, glad you're taking it in so well. Terry was...challenging, let's say." I laughed at that, imagining Terry, usually looking detached, screaming like a child. Ha, I'm such a horrible person. "Okay, I can except all that. Would that make the monster the same thing?" Talia nods. "We've seen a few cases like this during some of our exorcisms, and, from what it sounds, this thing appears to be pretty normal. Easy enough to deal with." I shake my head. "What does it represent though?I think it's too simple to just say they think they're a monster. I cut into it too easily." Chloe spits out her coffee. "You CUT it?! That big monster bear thing? How?" I catch my breath in my throat as I begin to feel a cold sense of 'oh god, I'm screwed.' "There was a bed with a broken leg. I was able to cut it before it did the whole face biting thing." I prayed they believed my bullcrap, and they seemed to not question it. "We think that it isn't coincidental that this happened while following your friend's notebook. So, we think, that this is Sarah's interpretation." Hearing that made me a little upset, yet, it also put me at ease. "So, she really is dead?"

"Chen's village was attacked by a hoard of shadows not to long before he came back home, killing everyone in the village." Isabelle said sadly " He told me the story in one of our therapy sessions. Ever since that incident he felt like he was trapped inside his body, not really being in full control it. That time when people went to the village, his body would just go on berserk killing all of them without mercy. It must have traumatized him not being able to take control of his own body. He also told me that, that memory doesn't even feel real, like his mind was playing games with him, almost driving him over the edge. While he was telling me the story it was like something wanted to burst out of him. Like caged beast wanting to freed from it's long imprisonment. I knew somehow it was serious but I would have never imagined that it would be this serious" Isabelle continued, blaming herself from what happened. If she just knew that this would happened, she could've found a way to stop it.

Thanks for the interesting story