The World Of The Myriad Races

I love the story and the lore it’s building up the progress so far is nice with the mc becoming a god but the grammar is shit, it’s good for the couple chapter but then it start off with the mixing up of the church names making me confused and then I just read a chapter where their was no space every dialogue was jumbled into a paragraph . I’m trying to continue but plz fix these ecen if you have to use Ai to correct ur writing. This makes me feel like your tranlating a novel but messing up with simple mistakes

So far, I’m loving and enjoying the story. First of all, the MC is OP and is portrayed as a cold king. He truly acts like a real king, which I really appreciate. He doesn’t rush into things and always acts smart.One small point of critique I have is about the visualization. What I mean is that there could be more detailed descriptions of characters or scenes to create a stronger impact (just my opinion and personal taste).The writing style is great.Thank you for this amazing novel, and GigglyCat, keep up the fantastic work! I’m eagerly waiting for the next chapters and am excited to see how the story unfolds! 👍

   Story is well written, and has quite a bit of future potential. Just remember this though, if you yourself, enjoy writing your stories, then that is the one thing that should matter the most more then anything else. Sometimes, it is not about any sort of money or payment, but should in fact, always be about enjoying sharing your work with your viewers and fans. And that, should always take priority, because if your fans and viewers enjoy reading your work, as well as potential future generations, then that is the one thing, that should matter more to you then anything else. For you see, people are more concerned in living in the here and now. While people me, we like to have a more, long game in mind. Now, don't take this as some sort of negative by any means, I am just saying, that if we want future generations to enjoy this world, then we have to be willing to protect what we love, in an effort to do our best to better our future.

Add evil Mc tag, cuz the mc is evil af.The story is great, give it a read. Highly recommended for fantasy lovers.Don't add any harem or romance, please.

"Humph, he may be at the peak of the 2nd stage but his skills are way below average. Unlike his opponent who has a clear grasp of his strength and his opponent's weakness. This is what happens when one only has false strength and not enough skills."

"Collin! What happened, Is something urgent? Are you alright!" Austin steadied the young man with gentleness and his eyes were filled with concerns. Collins was fully ragged and the smell of the saltwater from the ocean stuck Austin's nostrils when he drew close to the young man. Austin's eyebrows arched when he studied him, 'Did something terrible occurred when I am not here!'

"Is your sister magic?" Annabeth can't help but ask, her eyes greedily taking in the structure her blueprints she, along with her siblings, planned and designed. The two buildings are placed outside the U-shaped formation, but it's spacious and aesthetically pleasing to the eyes.

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