The Madness Within

Such a very interesting concept and play around reincarnation. Will be really exciting to experience the dynamics of our mc and her companions in this story that promises both fun dialogues and intriguing scenes. I think I will really enjoy this one 🔥

Well I feel like the writing quality and the plot is pretty good and the fight scenes are amazing. But the whole power system levels and evolution needs to be more flushed out

It’s a great story that knows how to carry readers along and make them picture the scenes in their mind. You should give it a try!

CHAPTER 2

"Surrender now the three of you so this won't get any more painful!" She said triumphantly. I also checked my two companions and their really tired.

"Of course highness," Kaguya said agreeably. "I am sure if the residents outside the Concessions were made aware of what these supplies are intended for, there should be no difficulty in ensuring that they arrive safely at their destinations."

I really love the original story but what you did here was too off with all the exaggeration in the number of slaves and also why does the Mc have to be so disturbed.Well I at least expect it improves.

more update please, loving your book..