The Horror Stories Of Food

Hello my lovely readers. Thank you for picking my first book. I'm rating my book five stars. Please take the chance to ask questions under this review.

I think its pretty perfect for the beginning, I love all the fights they're incredibly well written and I can't wait to see in what direction this is gonna go

as the author i will rate my book 5 stars..support me and your will never regret it.

I know this question is dumb but Why would he need to grow as a person when 'he's' a dungeon core? It's like asking a donkey to become a better lion😅. Also that paragraph that supposed to be hyping the story always crack me up, I mean "Evil gods introduced new species that have the ability to change the world! will the so called righteous god allow? or nah?" or something so obvious like this🤣

The story is interesting, being action-packed from the get go. The characters face a different type of apocalypse, which is a nice welcome because nobody said that the apocalypse had to only involve zombies, right?  There are some grammatical errors and the flow of the story is good. There were some areas that got me confused, but it's a fictional story lol. But on a serious note, I don't think it was wise to make a whole lot of noise when the enemy is most likely close by. Regardless of my review, go read the story and see if you like it.

And suddenly the blue color of the potion of kindnesd turned into a dark purple.

"then let's go in." the crown prince immediately said. He then turned and walk inside as if nothing had happend. Yuki followed him from behind and gave Ye Lin a slight glance. She saw his face look surprise from what Ye Ruo's action towards him.

I was gonna cover myself with my hands but he prevented me.