Tale of an Assassin

it's interesting, ngl I'm  starting to love it , keep it in touch buddy.  looking forward for it .

Traditional five star review from the author.Welcome to my Biocore World. Share your opinions and Comments, helps me find the right direction for my writing.Thanks.

This story has a lot of potential. Though there are a lot of 'Jargons' — Terms that seem to be common in this world and not elaborated by the author, the story remains a good flow and pacing. The quality is also great, and so is the world building. The abilities they showcase are very intriguing, definitely clutching readers' intrigue and expectations.

"Really Sir? So I was not a homo even though I'm homo? I knew it." Mr. Sangefull answered panicly.

Hana was only 9 years old when her parents suddenly died during an accident and after that her current guardian who is her mother best friend, auntie Seline took her under her protection and now she is a healthy 15 years old girl. Although sometimes she been bullied by some of her classmate, she knew that she need to endure and be more mature about it in order not to give her auntie Seline any trouble.

"The hell was that?"

'I want him, he looked cute and I like his eyes' she kept stretching toward him. "It seems that Lily wants to be held by you, I see even with a froze up face like yours, you can still seduce my precious daughter" the king grumbles with annoyance. "your majesty, I have done no such thing!" Quinnel turned a bit panic from the accusation and tried to defend himself, causing everyone there to laugh, even the king.

I wanted to sound tought but honestly I felt like I was hyperventilating.