Pink Moon

Dear Author, I'm a big admirer of your writing! After reading your book, I was blown away by your talent. I have some ideas on how to take your book to the next level and expand its readership. Would you be willing to listen to my feedback and suggestions?

its realllllyyyy uniquee.  waiting for ittt new episode!!!!

I have high expectations for this one dmad considering u already set the bar high for greed and 5 star just bcuz u wrote greed as it is too early to say anything about this one🗿

That's why she was sure this married is business for him, another way to earn success, the more successful he gets, the more motivated his dad would probably be to hand all the company to the young man.

"I have given those people a path for life. Just as I gave a warning to the people who were hiding in those houses. It's all up to those people to choose which path they follow."

'What'

"Indeed it is, in fact he was quite high ranking for a member inside of Konoha."

Most boring story l've read, I understand l'm being harsh since there's only 28 chapters out now but I nearly fell asleep twice reading it. I don't mind slow pace stories but I felt as if the premise wasn't used at all. I don't know if it's the author how he writes he's stories as l've read some of he's previous works and usually drop them after 40 chapters or the translation but I felt major dissappointment from reading it. Of course though my opinion is probably the only negative review seeing how everyone loves it so l guess read it anyways since the story is a mix of fantasy and steam punk.