Indomitus

So far, very intriguing story, very gripping and leaving readers for more! Please continue to write! The flow is ultra smooth and the linguistic-wise, it's well-written!

Very interesting premise. Would highly recommend

Great book...............................

Dark pouring potion into the magic cauldron, then his face slightly angrily and turned towards Jester.

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Haku: "Thwank yu mwaster." She says shakily.  

Listening to the people clamouring away about the Griffin Squad passing over on top of them. Shiro looked at them and thought to herself, "Griffins huh, I haven't tasted that before but they don't look all that nice..."

"No, sire, I had freed myself." Now mischievously grinning, the child stopped her pacing and placed a finger over her mouth as if to silence it from further disclosing the details of her predicament.