Book of Reality

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Something gives different vibes from the story. I read all free chapters. Not bad for a new Story. But you should make it bit bigger.  I hope later parts are as good as the ones I read.

This novel is a dark and twisted tale that will appeal to fans of psychological thrillers and anti-heroes. The main character is a cunning and ruthless schemer who will stop at nothing to achieve his sinister goal. He is not a hero you can root for, but a villain you can't take your eyes off. The novel is full of suspense, mystery, deception, and violence, as well as some unexpected twists and turns. This novel is a riveting and disturbing read that will keep you hooked until the shocking finale.At least this is what I can tell lol. I might have went to extrems

I have rarely been this dissatisfied with a book. It’s hard to decide where to even begin because every element feels like a complete mess. The world-building? Nonexistent. The author seems to have cobbled together ideas and characters blatantly borrowed from games, movies, and other stories without any effort to create something original. There’s no cohesive world, no sense of immersion, and certainly no thought put into how anything fits together.The basic laws of physics? Completely ignored. Everything is exaggerated to an absurd degree, and not in a fun or imaginative way—just nonsensical. The power system is equally horrendous, lacking any sort of structure, logic, or creativity. It feels like the author just threw random powers at characters without a thought to balance or depth.The plot is an utter disaster, with no clear direction or purpose. Events seem to happen arbitrarily, and the pacing is all over the place. There’s no tension, no stakes, and no reason to care about what’s going on. And don’t even get me started on the character development. The characters are flat, one-dimensional, and painfully juvenile. They lack any sort of growth or complexity, making it impossible to connect with them.Speaking of juvenile, the writing style is so childish it feels like it was written by an 8-year-old. There’s no sense of maturity, nuance, or sophistication. It’s filled with cringeworthy dialogue and overly simplistic descriptions that fail to evoke any emotion or imagery.Overall, this book is an exercise in frustration. It’s immature, unoriginal, and utterly devoid of anything resembling quality storytelling. I wouldn’t recommend it to anyone, not even as a guilty pleasure. Save your time and energy for something worthwhile.

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