The MC was ok in the beginning with an ok background and a cool OP ability and all that. The MC finds a cave with a lot of cool stuff in it that I found interesting then he decides to go into town and read up on the history of the world he was in. He then decides to go to an auction which is okay I guess,like he probably has better stuff anyway but ok. Then he buys some demon girl for "information" and I thought it would be cool if he becomes his servant or bodyguard or something like that but no,she becomes his love interest or something which doesn't make any sense considering of his history and the girls! I guess the author wanted to make him softer so he did this
or author wanted romance in the first place and didn't do it well. All in all the plot was interesting and I liked the MC in the beginning but after the romance started it messed with plot and just made MC and the girl really annoying,in short romance was forced and it wasn't enjoyable after that.
I like fighting scenes and how the story steadily progresse. The overpowered main character is a plus too.
I also like the fact that its not a generic harem. One heroine is more than enough.
It's not a bad idea that you came up for the story what I hate is the way your trying to build a love for the mc and Lucy I does not fit when I read it somehow it feel strange even is hit hate was sealed and the mc feels kind of stupid ? Why can't you speak after 100 ?? Your shy to communicate to even an ant ? Really. You have necromancy and you fond use it but only focus on dark magic waiting a good dead knight lvl 50+ and then running to a Academy when your basically lvl 90. Idk men it's confusing so sadly I dropped it
I like this story a lot. You have great skills man. I hope you become successful and entertain us with many more stories.
There are few mistakes here and there. If you can avoid them you will be nothing less of a professional. All the best.
Oh, what? You wanted a unique novel with an interesting premise and an intelligent mc, this novel is the one then! A well truly developed and realistic love? Great, this is the one for you! A mc whose emotions are like that of a real human? You got it. Hahaha just kidding, I the great author of this novel is going to ḟůςκ you so hard baby!
The synopsis was interesting and unique but it instantly turned into a typical isekai novel very quickly. The "intelligent" mc is the opposite of smart.
The "love" is so forced, it's ѓӓҏing you.
But don't let me stop you from reading this garbage, instead look at all the other reviews so you can prevent yourself from jumping into this pile of ѕȟit and wanting to kill yourself after somehow managing to read all the way to ch 50 :). p.s. author stop being a little ɓɨʈch by replying to this with the copy paste reply.
After he gave the gold coins to the old man, the librarian stared greedily at the gold coins for some seconds unable to believe his own eyes, but he quickly adjusted himself and thanked the customer, however, Arthur ignored him, he picked the books and left the building, the old man didn't stop speaking as he shouted at Arthur to come back if he needed any sort of book .
'He who is not contented with what he has, would not be contented with what he would like to have' even though the old man got a whopping 220 gold he still wanted more, human greed is really the worst thing in them.
...Author... just stop...
because a business owner trying to get a high paying customer to return is definitely the dangerous and evil greed of humanity... It's not like they're just trying to get enough money that they can live well.
Greed only becomes a dangerous trait when the person's demand for something will never be satisfied, and they'll go to any length to try and collect that thing anyway. So if I loved gold, and I could never get enough, and so I ran around killing anyone as long as they had gold. That would be when greed becomes a legitimately negative trait. Did the old man do something like that? No, he's just running a business. Just chill out with the 'humans are inherently evil and disgusting' ****, man. If you're going to try and talk about the greed that humans can hold in their heart, at least think about what's actually happening in the story you're writing first.
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or author wanted romance in the first place and didn't do it well. All in all the plot was interesting and I liked the MC in the beginning but after the romance started it messed with plot and just made MC and the girl really annoying,in short romance was forced and it wasn't enjoyable after that.
I also like the fact that its not a generic harem. One heroine is more than enough.
There are few mistakes here and there. If you can avoid them you will be nothing less of a professional. All the best.
The synopsis was interesting and unique but it instantly turned into a typical isekai novel very quickly. The "intelligent" mc is the opposite of smart.
The "love" is so forced, it's ѓӓҏing you.
But don't let me stop you from reading this garbage, instead look at all the other reviews so you can prevent yourself from jumping into this pile of ѕȟit and wanting to kill yourself after somehow managing to read all the way to ch 50 :). p.s. author stop being a little ɓɨʈch by replying to this with the copy paste reply.
'He who is not contented with what he has, would not be contented with what he would like to have' even though the old man got a whopping 220 gold he still wanted more, human greed is really the worst thing in them.
...Author... just stop...
because a business owner trying to get a high paying customer to return is definitely the dangerous and evil greed of humanity... It's not like they're just trying to get enough money that they can live well.
Greed only becomes a dangerous trait when the person's demand for something will never be satisfied, and they'll go to any length to try and collect that thing anyway. So if I loved gold, and I could never get enough, and so I ran around killing anyone as long as they had gold. That would be when greed becomes a legitimately negative trait. Did the old man do something like that? No, he's just running a business. Just chill out with the 'humans are inherently evil and disgusting' ****, man. If you're going to try and talk about the greed that humans can hold in their heart, at least think about what's actually happening in the story you're writing first.