Cliché story with cliché characters, nothing more nothing less.Girls and women alike falling in love with the mc easily thanks to his system. Every girl is a 'jade' beauty be it mature or young. The visual sense of their looks doesn't bring any realistic sense to readers because every one of them is a 'jade' beauty. Story development isn't exciting for any reason, just some girls got hooked up by mc due to poor circumstances, bad husbands, need of money etc.
First thing is that I love the name Jason, other than that the story is overall very good, I enjoyed the first few chapters. if you have sone free time I recommend this story very highly.
A very original concept for the cover page!The storyline is interesting, your characters are expressive, the descriptions are well-done.Good luck with the story!
Nooooo!!!! He was finally going to explore.....I love your fanfic now this novel with the same MC ofcuz I want more...Plz come back!!!( plz update BOTH )
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