This work has great potential, I can view that from the synopsis although it's short. The first paragraph with the word 'lemme' confused me.
It's only a few chapters but it's a good read but the author needs to work more in the grammars and paragraphs.
Overall, it's a good read as I've mentioned
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It's only a few chapters but it's a good read but the author needs to work more in the grammars and paragraphs.
Overall, it's a good read as I've mentioned
Keep writing till the end ....
There is some grammatical error, I hope you can pay attention to that sector too, as it helps with the quality of story.