With the amount of inconsistencies that the author didn’t go back and fix to chapter 6 I had to drop this.. has an interesting idea but if a author that post the story doesn’t care about his work then why should I?
doesn’t feel original at all, pretty much copy and paste like other novels awaken OP talent, face little resistance, constant OP throughout story with no difference, low story development.
I'm not sure why this novel is getting low reviews as the world and character develops in a very unique way despite the generic troupes. All characters including the side one(despite not having much screen time) are quite distinct and to the point even the Young master troupe is genuinely refreshing for me in the 3rd or 4th appearance. At least read the free chapters and you will immediately start seeing the uniqueness
Is there any book recommendations similar to this? I feel like the cheat is pretty unique and the MC is pretty smart which is just such a relief. If anyone has any please lmk!
Story has a good premise, but the writing needs some work.
The transition (at least for the first good bit) is very rough, at times contradicting itself, or not making sense.
The pacing is wildly inconsistent as well, which makes following along a bit difficult.
Lots of unnecessary repetition and/or rewording of information, sometimes for entire chapters.
Main character is supposed to be very smart, but does some really stupid things, such as throwing away all his advantages (stealth, range, first attack) to rule-of-cool the boss instead.
If you can read though this (and ignore some bizarre world building choices) it looks like it could be fun.
story is alright inconsistent with spells were it clearly states a single target spell suddenly becomes an aoe spell doesn't tell you before he transmigrated so you know what he's been training kind of just skips all that an suddenly he's an expert also some chapters math maybe off in an obvious way but still story is decent
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A good start for the trial read. Not too fast amd not too slow pace of the story.………….
The transition (at least for the first good bit) is very rough, at times contradicting itself, or not making sense.
The pacing is wildly inconsistent as well, which makes following along a bit difficult.
Lots of unnecessary repetition and/or rewording of information, sometimes for entire chapters.
Main character is supposed to be very smart, but does some really stupid things, such as throwing away all his advantages (stealth, range, first attack) to rule-of-cool the boss instead.
If you can read though this (and ignore some bizarre world building choices) it looks like it could be fun.
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