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1 star story development. MC has been there for years but once he got the system Enemies suddenly pops outs and starts messing with MC.
They have years to get the garden when MC entered the sect. like i would imagine snaching from a newbie would be way easier right.
Also it is protrayed that the Wang clan has this grand plan years in the making.
Why don’t they get the garden when they had the chance?
Story has a lot of plot holes.
Translation is 2 stars as there’s some miss translation like Catties turned into tonne…
Story background 2 stars cuz meh and it is drag down by the poorly thought out plotline.
Character design is 2 stars cuz it’s MC starts learning into the trouble seeking MC category. we all know the problem with the trouble seeking MCs right?
MC would deliberately be provocative inorder to drive the plot. Someone makes trouble? MC kills it! Then the master shows up to mess with the MC for killing deciple. It all happens simply because the MC simply cant be polite
This will and already has devolved into an endless series of deus ex machina to fish the MC out of situations that such an easily observed system will create. Let a cultivation novel be either low key, a steady progression, a power trip, or a fight against the heavens. There isn't really room for anything else.
reading this in the first 20 chapters got me age quickly as supposed to being transmigrated he likely the most stupid in thinking hiding from a true cultivator as a normal mortal is possible also this mc likes to create trouble for himself very much....well that's part of the story but senselessly making trouble for yourself....
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They have years to get the garden when MC entered the sect. like i would imagine snaching from a newbie would be way easier right.
Also it is protrayed that the Wang clan has this grand plan years in the making.
Why don’t they get the garden when they had the chance?
Story has a lot of plot holes.
Translation is 2 stars as there’s some miss translation like Catties turned into tonne…
Story background 2 stars cuz meh and it is drag down by the poorly thought out plotline.
Character design is 2 stars cuz it’s MC starts learning into the trouble seeking MC category. we all know the problem with the trouble seeking MCs right?
MC would deliberately be provocative inorder to drive the plot. Someone makes trouble? MC kills it! Then the master shows up to mess with the MC for killing deciple. It all happens simply because the MC simply cant be polite
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