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She pointed to a door and he carried her through it. He put her on her feet and continued kissing her. He pulled her shirt over her head and stared at her. She was magnificent, creamy skin and what looked like a scar on her ribs. He frowned at that, remembering how she must have gotten it from the mugging.

She was looking kind of dumb with her finger and her thumb

I’m addicted to this novel Didn’t expect it to be this goodI thought it was going to be the typical shallow bl romance but this story is pretty nuanced. No 2D characters here, they all have feelings and motives behind the way they act. I also appreciate how the author strayed from the cliches making it apparent that the MC’s childhood had more complications he couldn’t see due to his age in is first life. Looking forward to what the author has prepared next. I hope with all my heart that the author follows through with this novel because it’s amazing and super well written.

It’s a good story with a decent plot but it doesn’t really describe the appearances of the characters

Interested beginning I have high hopes for this book because of authors old books

The story reminds me of Takt Op. Destiny anime. The power of music to the enemy. I'm curious about this power source and it's development. Great work! Keep it up!

Really great start to the novel. Looking forward to more!