All of these chapters and weird things.....where to start?
What is this?!
This story was written as an entry for the 'Unassuming Protagonist' WPC contest, and I wanted to capture the raw energy and fun that the traditional shonen battle anime and manga gives me in webnovel form.
I am always improving, and I hope it can be reflected in the story too. There is heavy anime and manga inspirations, but no copying or plagirism as I wanted each story arc to tell a slightly different story in this world.
The power sets are defined ambiguously, like how it's usually done in anime. This CONTRASTS the traditional system novels, and I personally have preferred the ambiguity, leaving things up in the air for discussions and power scaling later on.
Seasons?! And Volumes?!
Think of reading this story like watching an anime or reading a manga, and each of the major story arcs are organized into various seasons. Each of the season tells a complete story, while leaving room for more to happen.
So many Auxiliary Chapters!
They are like the little scribble or author's note/thoughts, kinda like bonus chapters which gives supplementary information for the story.
Does everybody read minds, or can I not use grammarly?!
'Some say that the Brit speaks the true English, the language of the majesty herself.'
"Aight if you wanna be wrong, and not be free, then so be it!"
It really is a matter of differing conventions between the British English and American English. I was educated in the UK in the past six years, and this is what I am used to doing frankly. I hope this won't detract away from the reading experience itself though.
In a world where fights between superpowered people are organised into a sport, there are the cameramen who record those fights while risking their lives. One of them is Pethant, an oddball among the cameramen community as he strives to become the world's strongest cameraman.
Writing Quality:
Each scene is chock-full of details, although the sheer amount of details can cause confusion at times. I think they can be structured and arranged in a way where it is easier to read. Break them down and have some breathing room.
However, the scenes are intense, very imaginative and fast-paced. I often held my breath during such fights. Awesome!
Stability of Updates:
Daily updates? Hell yeah, 5 stars!
Story Development:
The story goes on a mini arc pattern. Each arcs explores more of the characters, the role as a cameraman and the world building. I'm a fan!
Character Design:
The story mostly follows Pethant on his journey to improve himself. There are many parts where we see his weakness and his abilities compared to many of the other more accomplished cameramen.
The author built his character by including many of his thoughts and his history in the interactions between other characters.
Excellent!
World Background:
I've seen many superheroes/superhuman stories. Having a perspective of these cameramen to take footage of their fights are a really interesting context.
The context is further elevated by the political, economics and social implications on the world.
That book is a nice surprise. I'm not used to the anime style but I could picture each and every scene with the accurate descriptions. The opening introduces you to the universe without information dump and the characters drew me to read more. Great work author!
Season 1 was so much fun for me to write, and I'd like to think I have created a good trio of main characters and an array of side characters that should spark some fun stories in the future!
Season 2 will follow the journey of our trio as they journeyed to yet a much bigger and badder superhuman city of the world! Jon will confront with his enemies old and new and the world as we know it grows every bigger!
I haven't been this excited about writing in a long time!
I'm back again. Reading this has provided me a good practice reference. Cameramen are the ones that give us the footage of everything we need to see. Humanity has always been to see is to believe and reading this has given me a realization that they are also heroes, providing the truth than written facts. Seeing is the most (but not the greatest type) of fact backers. So yeah I recommend this to all who wanted to read fashion models fight! Keep up the good work author, and by the way, I'm also learning how you write for me to improve myself.
Popular Reviews
If everyone is following the trend I'm expecting "The Strongest Left Ball-Sac" Soon.
It's also heavily anime-inspired with a powerless MC starting from the bottom in an isekai world. A mix of Black Clover and Dr Stone, if you will.
Have a good day!
What is this?!
This story was written as an entry for the 'Unassuming Protagonist' WPC contest, and I wanted to capture the raw energy and fun that the traditional shonen battle anime and manga gives me in webnovel form.
I am always improving, and I hope it can be reflected in the story too. There is heavy anime and manga inspirations, but no copying or plagirism as I wanted each story arc to tell a slightly different story in this world.
The power sets are defined ambiguously, like how it's usually done in anime. This CONTRASTS the traditional system novels, and I personally have preferred the ambiguity, leaving things up in the air for discussions and power scaling later on.
Seasons?! And Volumes?!
Think of reading this story like watching an anime or reading a manga, and each of the major story arcs are organized into various seasons. Each of the season tells a complete story, while leaving room for more to happen.
So many Auxiliary Chapters!
They are like the little scribble or author's note/thoughts, kinda like bonus chapters which gives supplementary information for the story.
Does everybody read minds, or can I not use grammarly?!
'Some say that the Brit speaks the true English, the language of the majesty herself.'
"Aight if you wanna be wrong, and not be free, then so be it!"
It really is a matter of differing conventions between the British English and American English. I was educated in the UK in the past six years, and this is what I am used to doing frankly. I hope this won't detract away from the reading experience itself though.
Writing Quality:
Each scene is chock-full of details, although the sheer amount of details can cause confusion at times. I think they can be structured and arranged in a way where it is easier to read. Break them down and have some breathing room.
However, the scenes are intense, very imaginative and fast-paced. I often held my breath during such fights. Awesome!
Stability of Updates:
Daily updates? Hell yeah, 5 stars!
Story Development:
The story goes on a mini arc pattern. Each arcs explores more of the characters, the role as a cameraman and the world building. I'm a fan!
Character Design:
The story mostly follows Pethant on his journey to improve himself. There are many parts where we see his weakness and his abilities compared to many of the other more accomplished cameramen.
The author built his character by including many of his thoughts and his history in the interactions between other characters.
Excellent!
World Background:
I've seen many superheroes/superhuman stories. Having a perspective of these cameramen to take footage of their fights are a really interesting context.
The context is further elevated by the political, economics and social implications on the world.
Season 2 will follow the journey of our trio as they journeyed to yet a much bigger and badder superhuman city of the world! Jon will confront with his enemies old and new and the world as we know it grows every bigger!
I haven't been this excited about writing in a long time!
Here's to a fun time ahead!