There is a lot to say about this novel. Think the author don't have a lot of experience writing novel. So, I'm going to make it my job to comment as much as I can on the mistakes he makes.
The story: The story development is kind of too fast. 50 chapters in, and he seems like he's unbeatable. Also, what kind of bs is this when the mc asked for the mysterious orbs from the auction boss and the boss agreed just because the mc won the stare-down. Isn't the mc suppose to be grateful that he is saved by the boss?
Character design: The characters are fine, no problems with it. Just not that great enough to get a five star.
World Background: ...Seriously, author? So far, I have not seen any explanation about the levels and the power catalogs and stuff like that. There should be like, Level 1-10, regular human stats to Olympic champions stats. Level 20-30, surpass human limits. So on, so forth. After reading a lot of chapters, I didn't get any in depth information about the worlds and people's abilities.
Not trying to roast the author or criticize on no bases, just trying to give some constructive criticism to the author.
By far one of the best stories I've read on this app while the story is a little rough at first by the time you get to chapters 50-60 it gets addictive Devon is an amazing main character and the background of the world is filled with mystery that makes the story stand out and the development is also very good and the updates are very consistent and sometimes the author is even nice enough to throw in some extras. I'm very excited to see what is in store in the future for Devon's adventure and all the mysteries to finally come to light. The only negative thing I can say about this story is the grammar mistakes that are made but that will get better with time. I heavily recommend this story to everyone and hope to see it to its end
The author creates a world that's both exciting and intense. The characters are ruthless and the writer's way of portraying fights and battle scenes makes this all the more interesting.
I've only read up the C3 but this is definitely a must-read for anyone looking for an action-packed, story-driven, and well-thought-out novel.
I can't wait to read more Author-sama! Keep up the good work!
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The story: The story development is kind of too fast. 50 chapters in, and he seems like he's unbeatable. Also, what kind of bs is this when the mc asked for the mysterious orbs from the auction boss and the boss agreed just because the mc won the stare-down. Isn't the mc suppose to be grateful that he is saved by the boss?
Character design: The characters are fine, no problems with it. Just not that great enough to get a five star.
World Background: ...Seriously, author? So far, I have not seen any explanation about the levels and the power catalogs and stuff like that. There should be like, Level 1-10, regular human stats to Olympic champions stats. Level 20-30, surpass human limits. So on, so forth. After reading a lot of chapters, I didn't get any in depth information about the worlds and people's abilities.
Not trying to roast the author or criticize on no bases, just trying to give some constructive criticism to the author.
I've only read up the C3 but this is definitely a must-read for anyone looking for an action-packed, story-driven, and well-thought-out novel.
I can't wait to read more Author-sama! Keep up the good work!