World Strongest Rearguard – Labyrinth Country and Dungeon Seekers

2. Hao ren would lose most of his connection with East Ocean Dragon Palace. This has been the main source of conflict over the story, but with Zhao Yanzi's death, he would lose his position as Fuma and, even if Yanzi's Parents were to keep treating him the same way, they would lose all reasons to get him involved in East Oceans affairs. Even though he is already the commanding general, his position would change extremely within East Ocean so that doesn't really matter.

              Despite Zhong Liang's face did not change his expression, but internally he had already decided that he really liked the warm brown eyes of Zemin Yan.

Their name was Frisk. Frisk chose to take the path of the first fallen human. The genocide route. They realised now, that it probably wasn't the best choice. Welp, too late now.

Fed to the rules and I hit the ground running

Alright this is actually a decent fanfic. No system, no ludicrous wish fulfilment nonsense.There are a few flaws though. The first is that you obviously do not proofread. The second is that your attention to standard writing rules is half assed : You do not start your sentences with capitals, you write numbers with symbols instead of letters. Lastly, sometimes it gets a little too much with other’s reaction of the main character deeds. Many times I have found myself half sighing/cringing when I read Hiruzen thinking "how is he this good oh my god 🥵🥵". No. He is Hiruzen Sarutobi, he has seen Jounin level seven year-old before and all kind of prodigees through his decades of kagedom. Get that fixed, and your story will level up in quality greatly. I wish you the best !

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I have never left a review before but I am glad i read this book,it is good the writing is super notch, a chapter leaves you imagining what's going to happen next and leaves you craving for more, the characters are interesting  Am glad I didn't give up 🥰 despite the waiting and I hope you continue to update daily can't wait to read it all. XOXO🥰