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This is trying to be RSSG with a rushed storyline and significantly less explanation. Honestly you might as well just go read RSSG. The writing QUALITY, insofar as grammar and punctuation, is fairly well done. EVERYTHING else is NOT. I don't want to spoil anything for someone who might actually enjoy the novel, but I will say the author is a half-step away from the plagiarism realm, and doesn't seem to care. The separate, clean living area for the rich? "'Shadow' King"? "Bright 'Horizon'"? You're not even trying to be subtle about it, man. E for Effort I guess, at least for getting a few hundred chapters out and sticking with it. If you meant this to be a quick rewrite of Lucky Old Cat's original work, then ignore me. If you meant this to be original in any way, shape or form? No.

Alright, I read up to give chapters and I somewhat enjoyed reading it. The premise of taking everything online was what captured my attention the most. the writing quality is good, could be better but it's much better than mine (kek) the characters are somewhat likable and the world background is good as well as the story development so far. keep it up and all the best for WSA 2022.

It’s a decent novel not a great one but good to pass the time. Some improvements for author to think about would be details pertaining to characters like hair color , skin color ,personality, relationships , etc. Also, MC so far gets everything handed to him ; there are zero dificulties for him which makes the story bland and predictable.

Book is amazing from the story to the MC and cant wait to see the full potential this story can bring.

I would definitely say this novel is something you should read.

Yo, I’m going to say it, this is the next RSSG. The this book is really good. Everyone has to give power stones. I’m already hooked on this book

I absolutely love this book, its been 33 chapters and i feel like a review should be written about this great story. Even though its only just at its beginning, i feel like the author has done a really great job in making it work.

Now i dont want to say this is the best or even one of the best. As everyone has different likes and dislikes and personally this novel has (atleast till now) everything that i like, so i am going to mention what i liked about this novel and if you find you might also like some of the stuff I mentioned give this novel a try you might enjoy it.

1. The MC wakes up in the past with memories of his future. Basically its a second chance novel ( I absolutely love this trope).

2. The MC has his priorities right and doesn't delay matters and handles them with caution and due diligence.

3. He is not a perfect person doesn't know alot of stuff and is trying his best to learn and make up for his weaknesses

4. The author tries alot of things related to game which i haven't seen before much atleast on webnovel originals.

5. It reminds of Rebirth of the Strongest Sword God, which is definitely in my 10 top webnovel list. So yeah i love this book.

Note for author: Love your work

Author here. This is my wsa addition, and a book that I spent a lot of time trying to perfect. Although I don't dare claim that it is, I think that this is a well written book.
There will be guild building, op mc, absolutely no harem, and good progression, I promise.
and ever since I finished my exams, I have also tried my best to maintain a 2 chapter a day release cycle. I think that you will love the book as long as u give it a chance.