World of Athair

I like moit was a good read but after MC reach academy, its become tedious and uninteresting to read, lot of info dump, lot of an obvious and unimportant MC thoughts.

This is some really great work. I really enjoyed reading it and I would 100% recommend it. One thing I want to add, some paragraphs are long, make them shorter.Overall, it's amazing!

alright I'm gonna leave an actual review with some cons and pros cons: sometimes it gets a bit boring but it's pretty well rounded. no harem. it's pretty hard to imagine some of the stuff. pros: not some weird world domination thing it's similar to I am a prodigy by rugao under the bridge. no harem. Battle rabbit and pigeon.

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Our MC is a fatty cleric... ..yes, a priest..... Anywho, he does by cough..... stealing or attempting to steal something of great importance. The plot is comedy, but with a steady growth pace

Quite a good novel..I like it..The plot & character development not rushed, mc is not too overpowered..Hope to see new chapters soon..Good job to the author

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I absolutely ADORE this book! Everything about it is just amazing. The world building is detailed and all the characters, even the background ones, are well fleshed out. Story-wise it is INCREDIBLE. I did not expect to come out of this having found one of the most well written, original stories I had ever read. The character development, the romance, the plot twists, it is all to die for. 10/10 highly recommend this book, keep up the good work author!