pretty good overall. but it really needs an editor. there are spelling mistakes and mistakes in what word is written often enough that it really affects your ability to enjoy the story. if you can get past it, then it's a worthwhile read.
This is without a doubt one of the better books on this site. Story-wise it is interesting right from the beginning. The pacing is excellent and the concept of the story is refreshingly unique. The writing quality is on point. There is little anyone could say to argue the negative. The grammar and spelling are tight. The formating is structured in a that makes reading easy and the overall quality of English is excellent.The story has enough chapters that new readers don't even have to think about update stability and continuing readers are given the content they crave. The story development is on point. It flows well and nothing feels "grindy
dang only 42 chapters? why didnt i start reading this when there was 1000 chapters already. very good novel so far. its very enticing. read through all the available chapters in 1 sitting
The beginning is kind of looking like MVS, but the story is great. I like the writing style too since it's quite easy to understand, and the angel theme is well found too. Let's see what you will do later author ;)
so I am deleting my past review, this doesn't deserve a 5 star review but it's a pretty interesting read, the author just has to work a bit more on the character design and story development it feels all over the place.
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