Wings of the Forgotton

This is genuinely one of the best pieces of fiction I've ever read. the characters feel real, and their interactions are even more real. I can tell the author has put his heart and soul into this novel and I appreciate it!Lloyd is one of the funniest characters I've read in a while. He's always the most serious character in the room, yet no matter what he does, there's always a little bit of dry humor between his interactions with others.I love the side characters too. I would have loved to see more of Zack and Lloyd but Zack doesn't show up that much anymore, but the other characters more than make up for it. Fatima is an amazingly built character. Tina, Veronica, Hime, Roderick, Felix, Rex, Lachlan and Lloyd are a combination of characters that will never get old. They are so wholesome together and I love it.amazing novel. keep it up author

Alright this novel is a horrible video game novel. Lucky drops galore alongside incomprehensible game mechanics. If you can ignore the fact that it's a game novel then you might get some sliver of enjoyment out of it as long as you don't think too deeply. All in all, it's not worth more than 3 stars, and I'm being generous.

One of the best isekai genre novel in my opinion.There was no updates in a long long time, but a lot if people are still waiting for it (inclusing me).

This story is not your average story. The mc isn't your typical mc. He can be cowardly in some situations. I am writing this story about growth. Not only does the mc get stronger physically but mentally too. If you looking for an mc who is perfect from the get-go. Then this is not the novel for you. Web novel is big with a lot of great novels with perfect mcs. I'd encourage you to read that and not to read this. But if you do read and still your review says. Coward mc but nothing else. Then I am going to take that as a compliment because it's an intentional flaw. Please like this so people can see this first.

Hello, I do not have vast experience in writing novels, but I do know that every opinion and review is valuable. Therefore, I would take this chance and express my thoughts about this story. First, there are no significant grammatical errors in the story. There may be some in each chapter, but it does not hinder understanding the flow of events.As for the development of the story, I think that while it's great and well thought out, there are chapters that are 'somewhat' insignificant to the story that I think can be described in shorter words. This is also related to another issue regarding this novel. I don't think I have the qualifications to advise a writer since I have no experience regarding that. But, as a reader, I think that the author likes to give too much detail in describing things in the story. For example, the author will explain the logic behind something that still has no significant role in the current phase of the story. I think that instead of going into too much detail as something was introduced, it would have been better to just give some overview regarding it until it becomes significant to the story so that you can describe these efficiently and timely. Why am I giving such a fuss regarding it? It's because I think highly of the story and it drives me mad to see the story progress, but it irks me that some chapters that aren't too far from being cheap fillers are present. It's good to present the story of side characters, but going into so much depth that causes the story to somewhat lose its luster is not very good.As for the character design. In my opinion, the author did very well in describing and giving color to the characters. Each of them has their personality and identity, causing their interactions with each other very lifelike.As for the updating stability, I have no issue or opinion regarding that.Lastly, for the world background, the author did excellently. The author did not give too much nor too little information, instead providing just enough description about the world and its power structure.Overall, I think that the story is good and is worth a while. The only problem is still the use of too much info in describing certain things and the chapters that resemble cheap fillers.

'Do you know each other?' Tristan asks

Around them the rest of the elders were unconscious, Shen Hong being the only one remaining standing.

[I will settled with a red John deer dress.] The dress makes my eyes shine out and reveal my well form body that doesn't have extra fat. Thanks to have bening training with two monsters every afternoon for years.