God this novel is bad first the constant changing pronouns he/him to she/her make it hard to tell who they are talking about this alone i could handle but the way the MC never kills anyone before they can return and cause more trouble is infuriating. It really is just your typical Chinese face slapping novel.
Would rate it higher but not much in 20 chapters! My standards may be low but all I want is a story that can keep my attention! If it catches my eye I rate them on if I think this story could grow! So I think this story has potential but see where it can fall off quickly!
People are giving this novel 1 star rating for dumb/no reasons.needs 5 stars to balance the rating.The novel isn't that bad...Godd*mn the 140 character requirement
Yo! Author's here! Most of us are familiar with the three states of matter: solid, liquid, and gas. But there are actually two dozen known states of matter. Plasma is one example, but scientists have also found other states of matter that only occur under certain conditions.And one of them are 'Strings', In this story, most of the bioengineered demi-human use metaphysical tentacles of their soul called "Consciousness Strings" to convert another smoll strings within the frequency of space that will generate energy when combined with the other of its kind.That energy was called "Mana', people gather them within their miniature realm called Athenaeum or just Mana Sea and cultivate them by making their center realm more earth-like to gather material for Golden Core construction! A nerdy cultivation that leans more on science fufu.But the world is unfair and the main character can't store this energy. So she use this tentacles of soul to rewrite her coding of life aka DNA or Genes instead, gathering the schematic of numerous Calamities and abomination to turn herself into an unkillable deity that will pass through all of those casual mana-farmer cultivators.That is the gist of the world, as for the story,, go check it out!
I am obviously biased as the author but Ibelieve in my book. Just give it a try, a fewminutes of your time is all I ask. Then dropyour view on the way out if you're not willingto stay. I appreciate everyone for stickingwith me through this trying time.
As though summoned by the power of thought, a horn called from within Jorvinburgh and the doors to the burgh were opened. Out came a hoard of men. They looked tired from the nights siege but not even half as tired as the ragged remainders of both armies on the field. A glimmer of despair washed across the faces of the Åscatorians as the news of reinforcements reached them. The battle had been fairly even despite advantages on either side in their individual battle lines. Now more Ørkadians were surging forth, and from behind to make matters worse for them. They would be fighting a battle on two fronts. It was a hopeless situation now, and they knew it.
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