idk about the rest of the story but as of right now i can see one painfully obvious pattern. that is if he ever goes to a restaurant for some reason he will meet either some person that asks him to get out because they want that seat or insulted someone he knew, they will underestimate him and ****. And when he beats them up, they try to rely on their family and **** ensues. all in all the story is filled with plot amour and cliches but is good if you just wanna read something because you are bored
Hello! I know, I know, shameless self-review... but hey, anything else would only be hypocrisy on my part... why would anyone rate his own work as anything but close and dear to his heart?Anyway, I wouldn't want to spoil too much but figured some of my planned thoughts (at the time of writing this, the novel has just been posted) would serve as a good indication if you would like to give the story a try, or mayhaps not. Both are fine, and while I would miss you, my dear potential reader, in case you would decide to abandon me, I would respect your decision. At the very least, please give me the courtesy of telling me the reason, so I could continue to drive myself forward and improve! Writing is not just my passion, but currently, in these dark times, my only solace! --- When you check in for the first few chapters, you might grow confused and ask yourself: "Is this really a modern day, urban fantasy story? Why are we starting from the prehistoric era then? What is going on?Relax, my dear potential friend, there is nothing wrong! The first few chapters, serving as a sort of first mini-arc, will be playing out in the far past, showing an initial journey of self-growth and introduction to Aziel as an individual. I do not plan to push it for too long, but there are a few interesting ideas that were never explored in these novels, and I had this itch... As for the rest, this novel being a genuine submission for WPC #238 you may have an idea of where we are going. If not, or if you are reading this far in the future (...how's it there by the way? Is this stupid pandemic still raging on?), then allow me to copy the contest details here, as it would speak more without spoiling anything."Male Lead - Strong Acting WeakDon't judge a book by its cover. Someone who seems weak and pathetic might just turn out to be an almighty person concealing his overwhelming strength."
This story has true potential, hope this trail come to a end quick so it can do regularly updates. I like group chat novels but This one is the best for me as of now.
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I have read this novel when its was in his starting chapter and the story and world development was very good but because of low chater update i drop this novel but now it has more than 💯 chapter so iam back.
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