The MC is alone on his island, without company, and he summons monsters that allow him to defeat other humans who are neither friend nor foe, they simply exist somewhere outside. His only company are the invocations and strange voices. How do you know if the author of this story isn't describing a paranoid delusion in his own head? If there is no ending, we will know that the author, a poor sick soul, died of hunger in his delirium.
You know, you could upload faster and moar. Other than this, there are no fatal mistakes :). I would rate it 4 stars, but bias is supreme so there are 5 stars.
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hey there. I'm not sure if it's just the first chapters, the translation or whatsoever but the amount of gold is driving me crazy. he started with a certain amount but despite that he keeps spending a luxury amount even not having much revenue. It's really frustrating the math doesn't match lol 😆 also this system is too unrealistic, I mean, you should at least set a certain amount of rules how stuff works and not poping up out of blue. nevertheless, Im enjoying the development, I'm used to skipping a lot of paragraphs in novels because of fillers and how authors often keeps slowly explaining and repeating and keeping the reader busy just to make some chapters. Wich is common and I don't blame bc I'd definitely do the same but it sucks nonetheless. anyway, your writing skills are clean and fine without regressive thoughts and it's really cool read such a novel despite the stuff I said.
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Rallying good novel. Caught my eye with its unique plot and chapters are really good. Looking forward to how it will develop further. Keep up with your good work!!
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