White Jack

Amazing just amazing. I love this story. I just love the way the characters are made and even the way the white jacks are designed. The sci-fi setting is believable and the story pacing is one of the things I love about the story. There are some grammatical errors but they can be solved.

The first chapter introduces the main character and her love interest, and there is some foreshadowing. The plot is interesting. The idea and setting of the novel is great.

The story is quite enticing and the concept is superb as well. The author has a good grasp of the English language and clearly has a strong grammatical power. As the author continues to progress I can tell that this novel will become a hit my only complain is the paragraphing issue but that will be solved in a jiffy. Give the book a read its quite interesting.

that was a very good story. The story is interesting and every time I read a chapter it seems to pull me deeper. the concept is pretty good. it would be great if it could make the characters of this story look alive. that's if you understand what I mean. for sure, good job and keep it up. [img=recommend][img=recommend]

All in all the idea is interesting. The origin of abnormalities is mentioned very well. Further the setting is well defined. What bugged me was the paragraphing issue. Over in all, the novel will do well as long as the author grows with the idea.

A great read. It's captivating and enticing with a great and well paced storyline. I would like to continue reading this book and see how it progresses. I definitely recommend it if you'll want a good read

the three brothers, white jack, black jack and jack black                                                                                  .

Action and adventure has always been my  concern. Ima give 5 stars to author because of this. I hope this book stands out among others. The plot is kinda intriguing. Wanna discover more..