Whispers of the enchanted realm

"Are you... the one talking?" I asked the creature. And it nods.

"Hey who are you calling a dog, i'm a Fenrir you fucking whore" Whitey rebut angry.

"Wait, do you like her?" I asked not bothering to hide the disgust from my voice.

He looked at her and noticed her slightly red eyes and her dimple-less smile. He walked towards the door behind her, he notice her slightly shift in front of the door, but paid her no mind as he slammed the door open.

y'all should read. its a wonderful novel. I'm sure y'all going to like it.                                                                             

Well, as a noobie author, this is the first time I read a template of a Villain MC becoming a father of the Protagonist(Son of Luck) I only read the trash MTL novel called 'I Became the Rich second generation Villains father' Try this new template, it's kinda very good for me!Since I'm also a perverted degenerate, I like lemons segss! Kampay! Kant0T

Beautiful, actually better written than many successful authors I've read from. While Jerald may have had a hand in that, it doesn't discredit the amazing work you've put in. There are literally only 2 things I would change, letting us know who's POV we switched with a sub-header, and letting us know when timeskips happens, other than than, perfect