Whispers of the Crimson Autumn

A really enjoyable story as i kinda got into army building/kingdom building novels i can say this novel is a really good one ... there are some problems tho ...1.The author sometimes forgets his vocabulary and writes sentences that make no sense well it doesnt matter alot cause you can understand what they are trying to say in the next sentence hope there is some improvement there :) ...2. World building is great but i would like a chapter specifically for information about the world (kinda trivial but necessary) slow development is also needed since our main character will need to fight enemies like his own blood so yeah that ofc isn't accurate since the story just started 3.Characters design is great the personalities fit them i would like more dialogue with the wolves i'm sure we will see that in the next chapters 4. The story is progressing at the right speed not too fast not too slow i think the author should keep this pace and accelerate or decelerate when need like a fight or a major event really good job there .... Review score 4.5/5 the only other complain i have is the chapters frequency ... can you please release 20 chapter per week XD .Overall the vocabulary needs a little fixing also for those who think artemis name isn't pronounce with artemisa and is artemis well who cares artemis is in english and greek artemisa is in spanish :) hope this solved your hesitation to read the novel...Good reading ...** Author keep up the good work hope you werent offended by the joke above ..!

only bi novel i can survive pretty good lacks some part but still the only bi novel i can survive so yeah ,.......,...........................

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This story has a fresh and unique story plot. It is really interesting. Keep it up author. I will support you on this and follow this story. I am looking forward how the little kid's life will change after the discovery.

5 stars for no system just keep doing you author 👍

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I shifted my gaze towards my phone. I wonder what Shen Jin is doing? Maybe I should text him? Since he's the one insisting that both of us hang out again I supposed annoying him would be his fault for wanting to be friends with me in the first place.

Chapter 6