WHAT IF I BECOME THE ENEMY

Amazing fantasy! I entered into his world

After reading the first chapter , I liked the flow in your story. The plot is also interesting and the characters development is also good. keep up your good work and I hope you will get a contract soon. Definitely recommend your story.

As a reader, I recommend this story. I think readers will like the story, because it was penned wholeheartedly. That is my honest assessment. Thank you for following this story.

The story is quite interesting and I love it! This book has a lot of potential!

This story has a unique plot and I'm rooting for it. The protagonist is also relatable and I love the writer's sense of description. Keep writing and keep up the good work. You have the potential of becoming a great author.

This story is good and I like the idea of ML waking up in a book that he trash talked. I believe there's room for improvement in the writing quality. It's not bad by any means, but it's not the best it could be.

Also the story is a bit forgettable and I struggled to remained interested. It's a good idea, but it doesn't quite stick the landing for me.

I can tell it'll get better as it goes on, but for now I'll just say this story is good enough.

The story is so captivating, the book name is so addictive it pulls you in. 8 love the plot development and the characters development, it's so unique and different. Keep it up author ❤️