I have to say this character a super childish that it comes off annoying and some of the sentences in this novel makes no sense like there's one line in chapter 8 I remember it was bright falling down or bright comes falling that didn't make sense, could have just said it's getting dark. besides that it's a lovely story it just the character give me a headache it makes me annoyed
The main reason I gave this novel such a low rating is that the author seems to constantly forget about previous things that YY has learned and/or characters that contribute to his power ups.One key example is his aspect totem, the 9 neonate. It is supposed to grow along with YY since it is a "beast mark of life" which allowed it to go through a heavenly tribulation back in the Tian Yuan world. However, nothing has happened to it since then. YY has grown multiple realms (nearly 4 full realms if I'm not wrong), but the 9 neo is still at the 1st tribulation which doesn't make any sense. He has eaten how many high level resources and nothing made it go through the 2nd tribulation? I call BS.Another example is the godly OP bow he received from the God Advent Tower spirit. From what I remember, it was made from divine beast parts which is on the same level of his 3-legged golden crow(don't quote me on this, didn't feel like re-reading that whole arc for this review). YY could use around 5-10% of its power when he was at the yuan opening realm(again, don't quote me on that), but he has never even touched the bow since leaving the Tian Yuan world. It's almost safe to assume that the author completely forgot about the bow entirely.Lastly, I gave this novel this rating because the author once said back when this novel used to be on GravityTales that he would flush out the main story within 500-800 chapters. This notice was around chapter 550 or so, but I have yet to see where the main story is supposed to go. I can see that YY will fight with the White Lunar Empire soon and obviously win due to plot armor and 1337 hax, but nothing about what happens from there. There is no big bad enemy at the end of the tunnel, no dark forces watching from the shadows, nothing so much as an inkling of knowledge on who/what YY will be fighting to end the story. I guess you could say that I've been waiting for something to be revealed and yet I feel disappointed every time.You could take my rant/review for a grain of salt, but this is just how I feel about this novel. I've been reading almost since the beginning, and I've just longing for the author to come up with more story telling that doesn't involve near useless random/stepping stone characters.Thanks for your time. :]
Hello, shameless author here.My third novel on Webnovel. I had a hard time finding new ideas for my new story. I've read various novels, but they don't help much. Even if an idea came up, it didn't feel right to me.This went on for days and frustrated me. And finally, I decided to open my game directory, which I hadn't touched in a long time because I was busy writing. You know, to refresh my mind.And I started playing Rimworld again, one of my favorite games. It was a simulation of managing a colony to survive various hardships.So, I thought, why not just write with inspiration from that game? After all, no one have written about the theme.Enjoy!
Rae title:网游之剧毒Status: 700 Chapters(Completed)......................................................................................................................................
This novel reads more as a slow day by day than an action adventure with slow pacing through roughly 100 chapters, the protagonist is defined as very ordinary and lacks any clear development so far, the worldbuilding is interesting but the protagonist is lacking meaningful strength, talent, wisdom or standing to make any story impact other than being fortunate. The romance is good enough though it seems his potential partners will lack in presence as they will be away for the majority of the time. Good but unfulfilling.
I really enjoy this novel so far. It has very interesting system mechanics that I hope will be the focus.Character detail and progression is a bit lacking and the world building still needs a bit of a touch up but we're only on Chapter 32 so plenty of time.Well done author on a novel that can become great!
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