A man who I don't have any relationship with, just a stranger that will fade away in moments time. But in his case, he became more intertwined with my life, causing chaos and different events that made me experience new things.
On impulse, he dropped his fork and sipped on his wine instead of glaring at her. Ana leaned over the table and whispered. "I saw that lady give someone outside something and pointed to this place. She-"
<p>"Yuan, why did you disobey mom? Do you remember what she said? No cookies before dinner – right?" he prompted though this time he was no longer waiting for a reply. He knew his son would just say his 'dadas' in answer to his questions anyway. It was enough that he'd get his message across –that it wasn't good to disobey his mother.</p>
Absolutely amazing read. If you get through the massive first chapter!!! Loved your character building and your world building.Really looking forward to reading more, I would definitely stick with it, the spelling, grammar, and writing are really well done.I would just cut your chapters down to like 1500-2000 words max
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