Walker Of The Worlds

Finally a story with substance!!!!. I am definitely paying for extra chapters I just loved it. Definitely the best story I read in this year. There are no arrogant characters(yet). Very detailed storyline(It is as if the author lived in it). I shall pray to god or whatever higher power there is in the universe that this books should get into the top 10 novel rankings and wish the author for success  in all his ventures. I also have a few requests:
1. Pls don't add any major romance plots in this storylines.
2. Try to stay away from revenge plots as far as possible.
3. Pls don't add any arrogant rich second generations and the protagonist beating the shit of them later. ( I've become quite sick of reading the same thing again and again in other wuxia novels I'm sure other are sick of it too)
4. Pls take inspiration about the plot from novels like the lord of mysteries and Warlock of the Magus World
5. Finally make this novel a special existence when compared to other wuxia and eastern cultivation novels.

This is my advice and my request for this novel to become a success. As you can tell any veteran eastern fantasy novel reader are quite sick of the above 4 points so I implore the author to keep the above points in mind while writing a story. Should you wish to become famous as a writer in this genera you should be different.

Again I wish the author good luck in making this novel a legend.

All the world building and mysterious of the story loose its lustre because of MC.
Mc is too blunt. He lacks uniqueness that makes a main character.
It gets irritating when he cant even use his brain for anything.
He is always like '"what do i do senior?". "should i speak senior ?"  
everything that he do, thinks all came from senior(sprit in the ring)

I get it author said, story is slow-paced  but this is too much .
After reading  150 chapters i can say MC develop from naive idiot to brianless puppet

Story is actually written very well as in grammar, flow and characters, plot  when considered individually. But big problem is how mc and plot connects, or should I say doesn't connect. Mc just doesn't have much agency and there's not much internal motivations in story form mc to do what he does. It seems like author develops some interesting plot, and then mc is made to flow trough that plot like puppet, mc just doesn't seem to have agency.
There's also the problem of mc being constantly bailed out by his ring when stuff gets even slightly hard, it's always some magical thing that bails him out, not his own intellect, skill or perseverance. This again reduces mc's agency, it's just very lame. It would not matter if it was just sometimes, but both of this things happen constantly.

Good example is whole thing happening in mc's village, he was already ready to go, he didn't have any reason to stay, no friends or family, no lure of great rewards, and again he was planning to leave. But then author made the plot happen, which I do agree is great when considered in isolation, but mc just started to participate in solving this mystery and helping around and we have absolutely no idea why, and there's no internal reason in story that tells us why. He just does like some zombie because the plot is there so obviously he should somehow participate in it.
He even wanted to see Lord of Hei dudes, but again, there was just no reason for that, he just wanted to because story required him to. There was no mention of potential rewards or anything that would help mc, if anything seeing mysterious strong person is just an huge threat.

I would really like to give this better review, but I just can't because story till 150 has been mostly just about boat(mc) being pushed around by waves, and every time boat is about to crash into huge rock, another wave just comes in and pushes the boat to the side. I would like that boat to have some oars, sails and actual person directing it.

Past 50-60 chapters (~ch 70 to ~130) showed an issue: The author doesn't know how to make story arcs actually develop.

Things happen, but nothing seems to have progressed. MC is in the same spot, except some inconsequential events happened (i.e. you could skip them, and the story would still be fine).

Oh yeah, this author seems to have taken away the MC's ability to think for himself. Asking the guy in his ring about knowledge he doesn't know is one thing, having the MC ask the guy about decisions he should be making himself is another.

the author was not lying when he said it would be slow paced, I'm 27 chapters deep and i can't build up any motivation to continue reading.
Nothing stellar or exciting or even different so far to catch my attention and keep me reading.
  The writing is very well done and the characters have have depth, if I had to complain about anything is the fight scenes are lacking

bro your book is awesome plz never drop

I like the story from the start, but the MC's personality changes when he met the Spider, MC couldn't decide on his own he has to get the opinion of that spider even on little things.

The spider does not act he is from the higher world.
I'll try to continue reading if it continues being like I mean the MC is the puppet I have to let go of this novel.

the MC and this story give me pure rage.

MC: oh so I made you lose months of regular pay and you want payment?
Villagers: yes
MC:*walks away*
villagers:*chase him*
MC: whY aRE U HiTtinG mE????


idk know if the author is a genius or as drain dead. As I can not tell if he wrote the mc to have the brainpower for his age unlike every other author or the author has a weird sense of right and wrong.

Also, the writing quality is pretty poor but author to you

My honest review after 300chapters. Author is trying to introduce a massive world.. Probably wants to make this novel 5000chapters. Explains everything all the time so let's say world background is about 3.5.
Story development is slow cuz of that world background ..And the questions that happen all the time between MC and his master and ofc the short chapters. The fact that 300chapters and the novel hasn't even ended a single arc is very disappointing. 3stars
Character design: MC is a peasant who gets an omnipotent ring that is making him stronger every day without him needing to do much just feel anger for example or feel smart or whatever

Helll...  Yah!!
He knows the way
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Hey fellow readers, could you let me know if the tournament arc is important or have important Chracthers introduced? Or can I just skip it?

it's good, id say you can skip most of it if you'd like just not the top 3 fights