VRMMO Dodgeball

Hello. I am the novel's author, Sweet Rambutan. I am just here to leave a general note.

Note: This story is purely a fiction. It is not real.

If you want to know whether the story is good or not, I welcome you all to read. Your comments and criticisms are most welcome. I can learn a lot from all of that ^_^

I really loved the beginning of the story. I have currently added this book to my library, and I hope to be able to finish it! I honestly love it, but I felt like you could have used different pronouns instead of repeating Berry. I do get that's the character's name, and you're trying to state that, but I also felt it was kind of repetitive. I recommend changing those to different pronouns like he, she, him, or her. Whatever Berry identifies as. As far as the book, I can't wait to read more of it. Anyone who reads this comment, this book is well worth your time!

This is wonderful, I'm totally in love with this book...
The plot is interesting, the style of writing is more than unique, and I'm totally hooked by the characters...
The book is already in my library, and I can't stop myself from being addicted [img=update]

First of all Congratulations on your good start!!

it is a good novel and it just feels too real if you don't count the high tech elements, good job author, the names of the family are super simple due to the naming scheme making them easier to memorize which is a good thing.

Good, this is really really good, I couldn't stop reading from the first chapter. Love the pace of the story and how you describe in such detail the world's background.
I will keep your work in my library, waiting for more.
Great Job author! Definitely recommended [img=recommend]

First of all the novel is really interesting. It has a good story and also a great character representation. You should read this novel.

Also I have to say that author is always trying to improve the story, you can see it with the author comments and other things.

Keep up the good work!

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