Writing quality is decent and easy to follow. The story doesn't make sense at all, the mc can't fight back? the mc can't kill? the enemies think like dumb xianxia young masters and you think making the MC unable to fight back a good idea? MC's being bullied by another person with a backing? How does that make sense, the MC literally has the two strongest hero as his parents and he's being oppressed by a lousy backing? How does that make sense. You want the MC to be a M and be bullied and not fight back? Sorry I'm out, the world background is inspired by sky high but with dumb xianxia mindsets. The mc's power is also an downgraded version of Ling Jiu's ability. Bye bye
This is considerably fast-paced and not really as slow as what you'd expect from a novel where the MC originally had no powers, but that's okay, the author knew what he was doing when he made this novel in first-person, perfect for a fast-paced novel.
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