vMMORPG: Broken Chains

Love the first few parts of the novel! It was an action pack series of spells and fighting scenes that engaged me to read further. And the story about Scarlet, *cough* man, that was mind boggling and drama.
Kudos for the author~

The story is interesting and it flows steadily and naturally.  The characters are alive and behaving realistically. You did a good job you with all these detailed descriptions. I will keep an eye on this work! Good job! Keep it up!

The story for so far is going well including the character development.  The world development is awesome.