Villain's Rising

Nice premise, reading about a villain definitely has tons of potential, but this isn't a villain, it's just an edgy powertrip fantasy.

Also, "lol" has no place in a novel, especially not if ou want it taken seriously.

The world background is good, the little we know of it anyways, seems like other planets are populated, and the whole hero vs villain dynamic has a lot of potential, as it always has.

I'll be stopping here however, no point reading more when i already think the MC is pathetic, not because of his killing or his god complex, but because of how he talks, how he acts and many other things.

please stop saying lol when they talk. They're not texting its real life. at least do haha. that makes it so much better already.

For a second there I forgot I'm a shameless author and it's my duty to review my book with a 5 star... *Ahem*

Anyway, this will be a qna review so, ask your queries away dear readers.

The grammer in this novel is really good and i understand everything happening really well. The mc is very interesting and we as a reader are seeing him grow from being a simp. The lore and world building is unique and leaves you with many mysteries

I must say I really like the story development. I think the mc is not inherently evil, the way he was raised is evil, not experiencing the love of his parents and no friends. If he was rescued before all that he won't be thinking the way he is now but yeah the world is truly broken...actually there's no evil and good. Bruh I'm allergic to pure goodness without anything in exchange lol, that's absurd. I like how the mc is evil hehehehe. Although, can i just ask if the romance is already cut off from him or there will be another? how will this end I'm excited to find out

How can anyone even like this? The main character is a complete loser. Honestly disgusting to read.

Had to force myself into reading a chapter.

Simp MC

The story has a lot of potential, but it is wasted in a easily evitable way.
The most common problems are:
- LOL.
- The author explain as something work just to forget it and making it work in a different way.
- Irrealistic or dumb plot device (alert minor spoiler, jump to the next point if you don’t want know: an explosion that erase 75 square km of the city where the mc is, but he says he doesn't know anything because he didn't watch the news and he was at a friend house, friend that previously he said was in the same city. To not add that even though the explosion happened in a residential district there were just 67 deaths).
- Expression used in the wrong way.


Although I may sound harsh (both here and in the comments) I don't want to offend the author, but just point out thing that in a much needed rewrite should be corrected.
As said before the novel has a lot of potential and it sadden and annoy me to see it wasted.

I hope to not have offended or upset the author with this review or my other comments.

man, this story got me so hyped that I want to keep reading more. I recommend keep reading. the author did a good job and I'm looking forward to a next chapter.