The beginning is quite captivating. The story develops at a steady pace while not lowering it's quality, with the only problem being grammar but just some minor mistakes here and there. The character descriptions are basic and simple though, but doesn't ruin the story and is enough to still let you imagine the character. World building is, as usual, what you would expect of a fantasy story which can be a good thing.All in all, a great read to say the least.Keep up the good work!
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Very good! Anyone wondering if they should read it, you definitely should! Haven't read all of it yet, but thumbs up for this one. And I have to say beautiful front cover. Great work.
love the book, the story development is kinda slow but the world the mc lives in is incredible and i think the book is going places,i would recommend this novel to others,so give it a read and great job author!!!!
hey auther if you read this you should add the flood from halo and destroyah from godzilla and carnage from spidermann, destroyah could be a demon of both khorne and Laharl
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