A good and progressive beginning, development of character is moving at a good pace, the switching of tenses here and there is a small flaw, otherwise storyline is good.
only chap72 but so far the story is amazing good char development this has no harem hopefully for future it wont bc harem is a big turn off that made me not wanna read certain novelsthe mc is smart and coldthere are barely if any spelling mistakes that i have noticedoverall really good novel i recommend u to read thisofc everyone has different tastes so if u dont like this novel after 5-10 chapters drop a review telling the author your opinions/thoughts or why u dont like, author-san please dont drop this early and stay safe :D
I always leave writing quality at four for anyone because you should always strive to be better. It's nothing personal. Your education as a writer is never finished. Other than that it was nice to read a coherent story, that made sense and I could follow.
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Honestly an outstanding novel. I recommend the read. The vivid picture drawn into your head by the author about the world, characters, and interactions is impressive. Keep up the good work!
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