Village Of Objects TF Saga

A very good novel where you both found a good balance between action and humor. All the characters are likable and well put for the development of the story.

3 DAYS NO UPDATE? WHY OH WHY AUTHOR, WE NEED MORE

I have read all the freely available chapters, and here’s my review: it’s very cringeworthy, cliché, and boring—all three at once. It also feels very AI like. There are even lines that say, "this changes everything." Most people familiar with AI novels recognize what this means; it feels like a literal copy paste  from an AI-generated story.Also if my review gets deleted, I am directly reporting this author. (previous one got deleted)

I read the novel for the first time, but it didn’t feel like it….The story was very easy to understand and imagine... I really liked the main character, especially his fighting style, which I enjoyed the most.

Your story is quite interesting, but what makes it bad is... you've given the intro about the world instead of just showing us the main character, and second is you've showed us too many places, characters, etc at the same time!