The premise was good and the story started out very strong. Though the MC was a little dumb, he had strong morals and gentlemanly character. The side characters and many beauties were also treated kindly. However, halfway through the novel, it's like the author was switched for someone else. Most of the beauties were tossed aside, the MC became less chivalrous, and thr writing became disjointed and muddled. Dropped at Chapter 122.
As it is just one chapter, I am posting this review for a little motivation. Please make sure that you keep updates in timely manner even if not on daily basis. I like the synopsis, which is kind of opposite of Scheming system and similar to Hero System. Although it is alright taking inspirations from other pieces, but remember to stand out. ✌️
This story was stolen from another website, where it was dropped a long time ago, don't expect any updates------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Promising plot. The world seems so dark and bright at the same time, the descriptions are great. Also the main character is cool since its not the typical “good guy”
"It is! Look at me. Do you know why we're best friends? I'll tell you. Because I was the only one who didn't use you. I remember back in our freshman year how you acted. You didn't even know any of the people in that room and you were ready to take a bullet for those people. And you weren't gonna make it with that mentality. And out comes me. A broken soul who NEEDED a guy to support him. And you needed someone to toughen you up. And as for deserving the academy? Do you remember 2 years ago? Remember when we were hanging out just for like 7, 8 months and i rang you up? Huh? Remember the exact words i used? Hey man... My lifes gone to shit man and i need help... Is it okay if i crash at your place? I had tears in my eyes that day. My legs were shaking that day. And you, Gus Cooper, without a moments hesitation, invited me and accepted me with open arms. So don't even start with that "deserving" shit."
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